來自世界上最好的商學(xué)院：沃頓商學(xué)院模板dissertation分析

 

Teamwork is at the core of the Wharton MBA experience with each student contributing unique elements to our collaborative culture. How will you contribute to the Wharton community? (400 words)
問：團(tuán)隊(duì)合作是沃頓商學(xué)院MBA課程的核心，每個(gè)學(xué)生都為我們的合作文化貢獻(xiàn)了獨(dú)特的元素。你將如何為沃頓社區(qū)做出貢獻(xiàn)?(400字)
One of my most satisfying professional experiences was strengthening my XXXX Team. Being the only female and expat in the team, I initially faced resistance, but as I embraced the culture and understood what mattered most to them, I was soon welcomed in the team. I identified their strengths and divided responsibilities, motivating them to take ownership of their work, in contrast to their earlier practice of everyone doing everything together. This improved team efficiency and enhanced their skills and enabled us to deliver more challenging projects in lesser time. Through this experience, I learned the value of teamwork and earned their love and respect.
我最滿意的職業(yè)經(jīng)歷之一就是加強(qiáng)我的XXXX團(tuán)隊(duì)。作為團(tuán)隊(duì)中唯一的女性和外籍人士，我最初遇到了阻力，但隨著我接受了這種文化并理解他們最看重的東西，我很快就在團(tuán)隊(duì)中受到了歡迎。我明確了他們的優(yōu)勢(shì)，劃分了職責(zé)，激勵(lì)他們對(duì)自己的工作承擔(dān)責(zé)任，而不是像他們以前那樣，每個(gè)人一起做所有的事情。這提高了團(tuán)隊(duì)的效率，增強(qiáng)了他們的技能，并使我們能夠在更少的時(shí)間內(nèi)交付更具挑戰(zhàn)性的項(xiàng)目。通過這次經(jīng)歷，我學(xué)到了團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的價(jià)值，也贏得了他們的喜愛和尊重。
At Wharton, I plan to share my diverse experience of the oil and gas industry. The concept of offshore rigs is still alien to many. By sharing my experience of performing a physically demanding job, managing 24x7 operations, leading male dominated teams in foreign lands and harsh offshore environment, I will add value to the Wharton classroom. With YYYY, I also learned to manage large scale operations, plan resources with 3 months-5 years outlook and deal with Joint Venture. During the oil downturn of 2014, YYYY witnessed drastic cost reduction and many organizational changes. In the classroom of ‘Managing Organizational Change’, I will share our approach to face these changes by focusing on new, innovative and sustainable methods, and technologies.#p#分頁標(biāo)題#e#
在沃頓商學(xué)院，我打算分享我在石油和天然氣行業(yè)的豐富經(jīng)驗(yàn)。近海鉆機(jī)的概念對(duì)許多人來說仍然是陌生的。通過分享我從事體力要求高的工作、管理全天候運(yùn)營(yíng)、領(lǐng)導(dǎo)男性主導(dǎo)的團(tuán)隊(duì)在異國(guó)他土和惡劣的離岸環(huán)境中的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，我將為沃頓的課堂增添價(jià)值。YYYY也讓我學(xué)會(huì)了大規(guī)模運(yùn)營(yíng)的管理，用3個(gè)月-5年的展望規(guī)劃資源，處理合資事宜。在2014年的石油低迷期，YYYY見證了大幅的成本削減和許多組織的變化。在“組織變革管理”的課堂上，我將通過關(guān)注新的、創(chuàng)新的和可持續(xù)的方法和技術(shù)來分享我們面對(duì)這些變化的方法。
 

 
 

Beyond classroom, I plan to lead the Wharton Energy club as the ‘Conference Chair’ and would invite distinct leaders of the industry, including YYYY’s ex CEO and BCG partner, both of whom are Wharton alumni. As an ardent scuba diver, I look forward to introducing the Wharton community to Scuba Diving through the Wharton Surf and Beach Club by organizing diving and snorkeling trips. Furthermore, I am excited to join the Wharton Dance studio to pursue my love for classical dance and share my knowledge of ‘Kathak’ in fusion with Bollywood dance.
在課堂之外，我計(jì)劃以“會(huì)議主席”的身份領(lǐng)導(dǎo)沃頓能源俱樂部，并邀請(qǐng)行業(yè)的不同領(lǐng)袖，包括YYYY的前首席執(zhí)行官和BCG合伙人，他們都是沃頓校友。作為一名潛水愛好者，我期待著通過沃頓沖浪和海灘俱樂部組織潛水和浮潛活動(dòng)，向沃頓社區(qū)介紹水肺潛水。此外，我很高興能加入沃頓舞蹈工作室，追求我對(duì)古典舞蹈的熱愛，并將我對(duì)“卡薩克”的認(rèn)識(shí)與寶萊塢舞蹈相融合。
Back in ZZZZ, I organized North India’s largest cultural festival ‘Rendezvous’ and choreographed our team’s ‘Group Dance’ performance. Continuing this effort at YYYY, I organized this year’s team off-site for 100+ employees and persuaded my colleagues for a dance sequence, which was the first ever ‘in house’ performance of the department. I would love to organize many such events at Wharton, fostering team spirit and would contribute to the close-knit Wharton community through my unique experiences and engaging skills.
之前在ZZZZ，我組織了印度北部最大的文化節(jié)“Rendezvous”，并編排了我們團(tuán)隊(duì)的“團(tuán)體舞蹈”表演。在YYYY繼續(xù)這一努力，我組織了今年100多名員工的非現(xiàn)場(chǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)，并說服我的同事們一起跳了一段舞蹈，這是該部門有史以來的第一次“內(nèi)部”演出。我很愿意在沃頓組織許多這樣的活動(dòng)，培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神，并將通過我獨(dú)特的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和迷人的技能為沃頓這個(gè)緊密聯(lián)系的社區(qū)做出貢獻(xiàn)。#p#分頁標(biāo)題#e#
 

 

文章的最后，小編想說，從這一篇dissertation中我們可以看到，比起完整的邏輯和清晰的表達(dá)，有一點(diǎn)我們無法忽視，那就是無與倫比的領(lǐng)袖氣質(zhì)。這也使全世界數(shù)所頂尖商學(xué)院招生的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一。所以，如果同學(xué)正在以世界頂尖商學(xué)院為努力目標(biāo)，那么努力提升領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力和領(lǐng)導(dǎo)才能可以成為一個(gè)努力目標(biāo)。